Digital Kestrel Manipulation

January 06, 2013  •  3 Comments

I took this photo in crappy light (moan moan moan) yesterday afternoon. The original image is below, and was taken in landscape format. Normal sharpening applied, but no exposure compensation - this is the light as it was.

Despite the light, I felt it was still quite a nice photo, but what about those stupid branches? Here is my next attempt - some cropping to portrait format, and removal of the two branches that were poking out either side. Again normal sharpening, but no change in exposure.

An improvement, though I need to spend more time on the background. Some brightness might help (about +0.8), but the branches behind the bird are still a little distracting. Wouldn't it be nice to have it on a single stem? This latter one is pushing it, but might be possible. My general rule of thumb is that I will make changes only if I can be bothered, and only if the time spent is brief. This means I very rarely make any changes, and instead attempt to get the clean shot I am after whilst in the field by changing angles and so on. This isn't always possible of course, and often I'm just thankful to be able to get the bird in the frame at all! So I admit to thinking "digitally" at times, by doing things like making sure two twigs don't cross, knowing that it's then easier to get rid of just one of them in post-processing. There is the old argument about completely falsifying wildlife photography by use of digital techniques, but I'm in the camp that says a bit of tidying up isn't problematic, and that by erasing a twig here, or a blotch there, that isn't attempting to create a scene that didn't exist in nature. A step too far, in my opinion, would be erasing a Hummingbird feeder and putting a nice flower in its place - that's not what was there, it's made up. 

So how about this? I've done more than I would normally do on this one; the idea came to me that these extra steps might be useful for illustrating this post about digital manipulation. So very carefully I've gone around with the clone stamp tool (where you can copy one lot of pixels on top of another lot) and got rid of the thick branch to the left of the main stem which went behind the bird somewhere. Using the same tool, I've also got rid of the thinnest twig that intruded into the undertail, and attempted to recreate the plumage detail - all relatively straightforward so far. Then we come to the branches below the bird - how can that be done? To be honest I really struggled with this bit, and I think that it's easily apparent that all is not quite as it seems. But that's only because I know what was there before - would you have spotted it had I only posted this one image? After all, the bird is the subject, and that's what draws people's eyes, not a few centimetres of twig at the bottom of the frame, and photoshoppers can use this to their advantage. Always stay away from the bird's head and eyes, as that's where people look! So what do you think? Please use the comments box to share your opinions. For what it's worth, I actually like both images....

 

 

 

 


Comments

Mick Southcott(non-registered)
Hello Jono,

First off not a bad job with the clone tool, and if it wasn't alongside the original most would know, I'll come back to this in a bit ...

What Noise Reduction software are you using ?

Everyone crops there images, some to death !! ( personal pet hate)..... Others with sense and an eye for the birds surroundings and also artistic flare crop more loosely leaving some room around the bird. So although this crop is fairly loose it exposes the weakness of shooting in poor light, highlighting the lack of detail in the bird due to low light ... Noise plays a part in stripping out detail.
The portrait style is the obvious choice of crop but keeping it as the middle version as it is kinder in the fact that it doesn't reveal to much of the weakness's ....

The subtle tones in the middle version are nice and would probably been lifted with better results using levels on the midtones slider to +1.10 to +1.20 the latter may be far to much. A slight saturation lift + 7 and then vibrance to + 10 to add a little pop to it ...

Your final edit by adding just a bit to much light also adds noise which takes some of the sharpness away, which shows on the birds breast and head area ...Take a look at the fine whispy feathers on the birds flanks sticking out towards the twig and the birds crown !!

Back to the Clone work ... removal of the main twigs above the birds wings is not bad still slightly visible on middle version but easily sorted with small clone airbrush at 40/60%.
The tail repair is great, as is the removal of main stem and o.o.f one behind the tail, but why the need to straighten the stem that the bird is perched on, the original curved stem was better.

The small twig that go's to the tail, use the bud from that to repair the one that has its tip missing and then its straight forward clone work from then on, repairing the stem sides at super zooms using small clone tools for detailed work getting bigger as you work away from the bird .....

How's that for a comment !!

From a Pixel Peeping Gull Freak ...

Mick ...
Enid(non-registered)
I like the last version best as I think the lighter background brings the image to life more and yes it is less distracting by removing the twigs.
Tony Wells(non-registered)
Image looks fine to me, as you said if the original was not there to see, I dont think anyone would have been aware of the deleted twigs. To me digital manipulation is an option that is there in digital photography so why not use it. In an ideal world the weather would always be good and birds would always sit out in the open in the perfect pose, but its not like that so if a good image can be made better then so be it.
I have more of a problem with people over sharpening pics to be honest as this can look unrealistic.
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